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Did you know the universe is finite?

 That one day all the stars and suns   

Will be pulled beyond our view

 Or simply use up all their fuel.  

If it should all end that way

 We will lose our light  

We shall lose our warmth

 All will freeze and be torn apart.  

 


                                                              Did you know the universe is finite?  

                                                              That one day strings will snap

                                                               And that’ll be that  

                                                               The universe will collapse.

                                                              We’ll be compressed   

                                                                To the size of an atom

                                                                Then smaller still   

                                                                 Till all is gone.

 

 

 

                                                                                                                            Did you know reality is finite?

                                                                                                                            It’s all in our minds

                                                                                                                             For when the time comes

                                                                                                                             When we all die

                                                                                                                              All else will follow.

                                                                                                                             No one to imagine and dream
                                                                                                                             No one to think and find

                                                                                                                              No one to hold up reality.

                                                                                                                             It will simply all be gone

                                                                                                                              As though we never existed.

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:icongloryangel:
Personally I'm not a fan of poetry, but kudos on the fact-checking (one of the theories about the end of the universe is something called "the big sqeeze").
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:iconarcane-shadow-razil:
i know :D the big squeeze and think the other one was called the big rip, i think..i forget.

glad you like though.
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:icongloryangel:
The other is the expanding universe theory.
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:iconthenighttimewanderer:
The shocking truth that no body wants to admit...
I like poetry like this, truth needs to be heard, no matter how bad it hurts sometimes.
:)
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:iconarcane-shadow-razil:
shocking truth? i didn't really think of this as shocking or painful. it's seems to far away or abstract to call painful. and not so surprising that things do have an ending. but if that's how you see it then okay. :)

glad you liked.
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:iconthenighttimewanderer:
When I say shocking, I mean shocking in the sense that everything will end at some point during the Big Crunch; something that is shocking and unknown to most :)

Some people can't or won't accept that fact that all will end one day, that's all :)
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:iconarcane-shadow-razil:
ah, you didn't expect many people to know about that theory of how the universe ends. :D

it's very easy to think life will go on because we generally don't feel an immediate threat plenty of things.
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:iconthenighttimewanderer:
Of course it is. If Humanity all thought and accepted the notion that the universe may very well end one day, there would either be complete anarchy or complete peace.

People like to remain in the dark; many would rather think that everything is fine, when its not the case. People either are unwilling or unable to accept reality, which leads to apathy which causes a plethora of more and more issues.
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:iconarcane-shadow-razil:
I would have to disagree on the first paragraph. From what I remember of those theorys, they never had a timeline of when they could happen. The fact that they don't have anything to say on a possibility time means such a thing could happen at any time, which doesn't change anything at all. Everyone will die-at some point. I could die tomorrow or I could die 60 years from now from a variety of causes. But because there is no known set time or a way to prevent it, I can do nothing but live life. Similar to the theory.

We already know that an asteroid will be in a direct collision for the earth some time in the future, and people have thought up ways to possibly avoid that fate. But you don't see the world in total anarchy or peace. Similarly, we know when the sun will use up the last of it's fuel, expand and then retract into a dwarf star. But because such things are so far in the future we have little reason to think of it much.

While I do understand that there have been times in human history where we've seen problems and tried to forget about them, eventually it's shouted loud enough that it has to be dealt with, attention is drawn to it and people will begin to do something.

As it is,from what I know of this, there isn't enough known about dark matter--a component in the theory's of the big squeeze and big rip--for us to really say much. As it is, it's too an abstract way to go and far away enough that it isn't necessarily that people don't want to think about it--some do, some don't--It's that it's not that immediate of a threat nor understood enough.
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:iconthenighttimewanderer:
Aye, I can agree with you here; won't argue facts or the truth. I think you and I can agree on the fact that we as a society generally wait till a problem threatens us with extinction till we finally decide to act and remedy the matter.

We can all die tomorrow or in the future, live life to the best.

I am sorry, I would normally provide a much better debate, but I am rather tired and must retire for the night. I look forward to our next conversation.
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